WTN: A Brun Haiku

by **Patchen Markell** » Mon May 07, 2018 10:45 am

Brun 14 Morgon.

Purple blooms line a stone wall.

Thank god spring is here.

by **SteveEdmunds** » Mon May 07, 2018 11:27 am

short five syllables

by **Patchen Markell** » Mon May 07, 2018 12:28 pm

Brun-four-teen-Mor-gon?

(I can see how the boldface made it look like that wasn’t included...)

by **Robin Garr** » Mon May 07, 2018 12:53 pm

Looks like a full haiku to me, but yes, the bold imparts a jolt that isn't entirely zen. :lol:

by **Patchen Markell** » Mon May 07, 2018 1:11 pm

AT LEAST I WASN'T SHOUTING :wink:

by **SteveEdmunds** » Mon May 07, 2018 4:47 pm

aha! I missed that! :oops:

by **Patchen Markell** » Mon May 07, 2018 4:50 pm

The important thing

Is that the wine made me smile;

Think you'd like it too.

by **David M. Bueker** » Mon May 07, 2018 6:37 pm

It’s very wine geek

Debating the haiku form

Instead of the wine